Once upon a time in a village engulfed in forest and winter that village called Washboard in that vilage there was an awesomely awesome man named A.C. he is 16 and has the best set of washboard abs.one day after toning his abs A.C. went outside to cool off in the cold snow when a giant purple fire breathing dragon came out of nowhere. A.C. saw the dragon and started running but the dragon kept following him then it disappeared and A.C. looked around and he sighed in relief but then the dragon dropped out of the sky and lit his close on fire with it breath. The dragon looked down to see A.C. on fire but he wasn’t then the dragon said “wow this situation never happened before” then A.C. said “hears a situation” and started pointing at his abs. The dragon was so amazed with his abs they became friend and had magical adventures together. But after a while A.C. and the dragon moved away to the Jersey Shore and auditioned for the show the Jersey Shore but didn’t get the part and now every time that they film A.C. and the dragon dance in the background yelling stuff but you can’t hear them because Mike keeps yelling hears a situation every time someone says situation and points at random things.
Wow, this is a whole story crammed into a paragraph! I would suggest looking for places in your introduction where you could "break" the narrative into new paragraphs. The first paragraph should be your hook to draw the reader in. For example, ending with, "a giant purple fire breathing dragon came out of nowhere" would give the reader pause to wonder, "a dragon? What will he do to A.C.?" Remember your plot pyramid; the hook is the exposition, and all the rising action should occur in paragraphs after it.
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